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I have decided to change my idea to a stop motion film. I have done some stop motion in the past but haven't as of late and would like to get back into it. For my stop motion I want to focus on the concept of leaving your childhood behind and use possibly craft beads to create a child figure that dissipates. I have been working on a project in my fibers class related to this idea of "where did my childhood go?" and wanted to expand on it in other classes. I have uploaded a previous stop motion animation I have done just to demonstrate kind of what I mean.
Hi Tessa
ReplyDeleteI think this is a very powerful piece. For me right now where the arm goes into the rectangle and kind of disappears doesn't quite work. I think the type in the bottom right really crowds the lady who also is a little too tight in that frame on the right. Maybe the background can be more like the upper right where you have a bar at the top to accommodate type and image breaking the picture plane. Nice trick. Lastly I wonder if you need to be so literal. I'm not sure you need to define it with type, seems like the images do a good job of that. Wonder if the type was more of a whisper, and more maybe poetic instead of literal? At a minimum I would use a less heavy font.